Gossip,
leaked into hell,
with all I despise,
including,
myself.
Author notes
Contest prompt: to the one you despise. 10 words only,
almost puked!
A contest entry
- To The One You Despise by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended April 25, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Really fine work, so simple.
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This is really good. You accomplish a lot with only ten words, and I like the almost-rhyme with "Hell" and "myself." Good job!
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the things gossip can do...well brought out in your dark write...
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I swear to you empathetic rose
i will not wander in the pits of gossip hell and join
the hags whose only joy is the drool of their mouths.
been there done that...and it only bites you in the
ass everytime!
hey..did you hear the latest about Brittany Spears?
oh...crap....
wink-wink
ears/Seattle -
ooooh nicely done
short and well, not so sweet, just how i like them!
Tasha
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so sad... sorry someone can truly make you feel this way about yourself.
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Brilliant
This is marvelous work.
Sincerely,
Camille -
Nicely worded.
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