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Self Crucified Tears

 

 

Gossip,

leaked into hell,

with all I despise,

including,

myself.

 

 


 

 

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Contest prompt: to the one you despise. 10 words only,
almost puked!

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  • celadia
    May 1, 2008
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    Really fine work, so simple.


  • Pingwen
    April 28, 2008

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    This is really good. You accomplish a lot with only ten words, and I like the almost-rhyme with "Hell" and "myself." Good job!


  • crimsondew
    April 28, 2008
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    the things gossip can do...well brought out in your dark write...


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    I swear to you empathetic rose

    i will not wander in the pits of gossip hell and join
    the hags whose only joy is the drool of their mouths.
    been there done that...and it only bites you in the
    ass everytime!

    hey..did you hear the latest about Brittany Spears?
    oh...crap....
    wink-wink
    ears/Seattle


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    April 25, 2008

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    ooooh nicely done
    short and well, not so sweet, just how i like them!

    Tasha


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 25, 2008
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    so sad... sorry someone can truly make you feel this way about yourself.


  • Camille Morin gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    Brilliant

    This is marvelous work.
    Sincerely,
    Camille


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 24, 2008
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    Nicely worded.

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