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Ardent seeker of flying beauties

Embracing anticipation
searching sharp
    for vibrant-winged angels,

eyes of gloomy little princess
stare into distance. 

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Prompt : Pic by Julie Lavon

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  • Peteskid gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    such a lot in a small package...kind of like the art and beauty of the subjects... very nice...well deserved gold here...PK


  • Venugopal gold member
    June 25, 2008
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    nice, kudos to you, now you realised your dreams. Distance become near


  • simpliterature
    April 28, 2008
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    Beautiful indeed.
    Congratulations!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 25, 2008
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    So beautifully crafted... x


    • Kiddy
      April 25, 2008
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      glad you loved this little poem.... thanks for the gold, dear L!

      Love
      -Kiddy

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