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Seduction

Crossing grass and scattered leaves,
Adjacent to fountain heave,
Chirping birds, and dancing flowers,
Tinkle thud, vision so far

Towards the sky, lofty and away!

Peeped into two eyes deep,
Touch of sight, oh silent creep,
Towards the physique, tender and neat,
Burning senses, pageant heat,

Under the tree, thicker and tall!

Conversed eyes, silent the lips,
Dialogue hushed, soundless, just chip!
Fervent to, in ocean, dip…..
Did not heed to thought of blip!

In the mid of fragrant flowers!

Neither haste, nor patience stood,
I sent message, as I could,
Bashful damsel, bold sweetheart,
Love is passion, seduction is art!

In the comfy bed in alone…….


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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    your poetry is crafted with elegance it makes me think of hand made lace all pretty and delicate
    thank for this beautiful read my friend


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      December 29, 2008
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      My Sweet Littlefishone!

      Many thanks dear friend Littlefishone for your so kind words of encouragement and appreciation; I really feel delighted over your kindness.
      Best wishes!


  • ylova
    September 29, 2008

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    "Love is passion, sediction is art!" I truly do love your style of writing. Yet another amazing piece.


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      October 9, 2008
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      Many Thanks!

      Many thanks kind friend Ylova for your so tender words of appreciation; I am really moved!!!

  • Shamaila Khalid
    June 17, 2008
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    Romantic

    Very romantic poem

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