White gown,
fisted ring,
just a groom,
then,
noone can stop me
from adult rollercoaster.
In a list
A contest entry
- where's the butterfly? by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very sweet... wonderful reflection on youths impatience... Good write.
Ken
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Thank you so much.
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Cuteness!! A creative and lovely take on the pic!
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Thank you so much for such lovely reviews..
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I have a problem
Both angels are just precious. The one of the story and the other one is pose to the right...
the writer has captured them both just right....mac -
I have a problem
Both angels are just precious. The one of the story and the other one is pose to the right...
the writer has captured them both just right....mac
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Truly creative and cleverly worded... x
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Wow, I would never have thought to write that. Very creative. She does look like a miniature bride, doesn't she. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you
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