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Stolen Innocence

He raped the rose-
colored glasses that
made life wonderful!

A contest entry

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 25, 2008
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    so sad.


  • Melodies
    April 25, 2008

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    Fine writing by a talented poetess. Haiku is one of my favorite poetry forms and you gathered up just the right words and made this one walk and talk beautifully.


  • SuicidalLover
    April 24, 2008
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    Yes, I know how this feels really well. Wish you luck in the contest.