Thinking you from dawn to dusk,
Remembering you from dusk to dawn,
Seeing you while hiding self,
Blushing eyes, and bashful heart
Could not tell you I love you!
Laughing doll, jiggling dame,
Didn’t know the time’s game,
I had, like her, feelings same,
Finding her was only aim,
Could not tell you I love you!
People told me about her days,
Doll is crossing childhood phase,
Changing into youthful craze,
If you see, cannot turn gaze!
Could not tell you I love you!
I loved her, or loved with me,
I was shy, bold was she,
She chased me, all hours twenty,
I pretended I did not see
Could not tell you I love you!
Her sight pleased me even this day,
Though gone are now fairy and Fay,
Millions of tears I had to sway,
May she get the cue, I pray,
Could not tell you I love you!
Please tell me what you think
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THIS IS DELIGHTFUL, SO POIGNANT, TOK ME BACK TO THE FRAGILITY OF YOUTH.I CAN ALMOST FEEL THE HEAT OF THIS POOR SHY BOYS BURNING CHEEKS.YOU PAINT A LOVELYPICTURE OF INNOCENCE AND YEARNING
THANKYOU LITTLEFISHONE
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Many thanks!
Many thanks dear friend for your so tender words and magnificent appreciatin on my humble effort. May God bless you!
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Many thanks!
Many thanks dear friend for your so tender words and magnificent appreciatin on my humble effort. May God bless you!
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All of this was amazing. But my favorite part was the last stanza! I am really enjoying reading your work. Thank you for sharing
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Dear Ylova!!
Respected Friend Ylova!
Your precious words mean a lot to me.. thank you very very much for your valuable critical appreciation!
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