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Shyness

Thinking you from dawn to dusk,
Remembering you from dusk to dawn,
Seeing you while hiding self,
Blushing eyes, and bashful heart

Could not tell you I love you!

Laughing doll, jiggling dame,
Didn’t know the time’s game,
I had, like her, feelings same,
Finding her was only aim,

Could not tell you I love you!

People told me about her days,
Doll is crossing childhood phase,
Changing into youthful craze,
If you see, cannot turn gaze!

Could not tell you I love you!

I loved her, or loved with me,
I was shy, bold was she,
She chased me, all hours twenty,
I pretended I did not see

Could not tell you I love you!

Her sight pleased me even this day,
Though gone are now fairy and Fay,
Millions of tears I had to sway,
May she get the cue, I pray,

Could not tell you I love you!

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  • Ylova gold member
    September 29
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    All of this was amazing. But my favorite part was the last stanza! I am really enjoying reading your work. Thank you for sharing


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      October 9
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      Dear Ylova!!

      Respected Friend Ylova!
      Your precious words mean a lot to me.. thank you very very much for your valuable critical appreciation!