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reconsidering rejected

 

Reaching repose remains
relevant, reminiscing.


Releasing rampant rages
require rough reasons.


Relaxed, reserved, respondent,
rhythmic recantation.

 

Rocking,

remembering,

regretful,

rocking...

 

Revenge roars.

 

Regressing, ravaging, returning

rapid reckonings.

Reimposing rabid raking

reunites rushing ruptures.

 

Reeling, raining,

red Rorschach rug

receives ripped remains.

 

Retreating...
remorseful.


 

Author notes

Prompt:Choose a letter from the alphabet, and then choose a word for a title using that letter as your prompt.

Use that same letter in a word in each line of your poem.

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RyanosaurusWrecks

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  • NeonRose
    June 13, 2008
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    Wow! Really rather riveting!


  • OnceUponAMind
    May 7, 2008

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    Awesome! This is completely amazing Great Job and best of luck to you in the contest!!


  • malmadre gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    All sorts of images flood through this with the mind left to fill in the gaps...done without a single boring word. A job well done! and what an interesting contest...


  • ultimate beluga
    April 25, 2008

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    damn this is good! why do i feel like i should be using r's...?
    im impressed that youve used complete alliteration and its still a good, legible poem... tough task. well done!


  • Kelli Marie
    April 25, 2008

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    A nice write. You did a good job. It is hard to use the same letter as the first letter and have it make sense. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli


  • background music
    April 25, 2008

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    wow!! this must have been hard to do!! You are so creative This is better then I could ever articulate, and it makes sense to. Good luck in the contest.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    wow! that was a hard one....

    Brave poetic warrior you are, that was a tough one!
    Kelli Marie sure is making everyone work for this contest! wow!
    way to get it done!
    ears/Seattle
    Did you forget it's suppose to 50 lines?
    (gotcha) giggle-giggle amazing!

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