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Fire

Fire resonates from inside
spewing out my mouth...
You bastard!



A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    May 16, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I have felt exactly like this on many occasions. I think that you have summed up that feeling quite well.


  • Camille Morin gold member
    April 27, 2008
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    This is excellent.

    Lots of energy, venomous.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    yes! you fucken rock! i love your style catie your a hot woman i know you nailed this if you didnt to the contest giver to me you definately did you rock chic!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 25, 2008
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    Hmmm, how it is so tempting to do that one, too.


  • eltortedequeso
    April 24, 2008

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    oooooh, shiver! very strongand emotive. definitely have been behind (and infront) of those words before! good luck!!!

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