Dark is all around me, masking all it touches
Leaching over all that makes me happy, all that I need to live
Leaving me with depression, feelings of no one for me
I reach out for help, something to keep me alive
But the dark comes over me stronger every time,
Pushing me down and down again, allowing nothing through
I am scared with fear succeeding through me like wildfire
Suppressing my inner being unrelenting. I fight with myself,
Hoping I will win overcome my fear, gain a foothold higher up.
Then I think to myself, I love her. Instantly I feel the dark react,
I look around and see gray, less black in my eyes.
I start picturing you in my head, paint a picture in my heart, I can move.
Filled with determination, I repeat your name in my heart, giving myself a warmth
As the dark recedes, I reach yet again, hoping to find life above
I find a hand grasping mine, never letting go as I am being pulled up.
I shout your name, so full of courage and love, I propel upward, toward the hand
I look down, seeing the dark shrink below, I smile as I turn to see who saved me...
It is you, the one I love to see, to hold, to have, to love....you are my light.
We sit there, eye to eye, hand in hand, millions of words silently told
You smile as I smile, leaning to pull you closer. Now nose to nose, still eye to eye
We kiss. I have life and more in my arms we say indirectly.
Author notes
An attempt at writing a dream and feelings of how she is involved in my life. Whenever things go bad, I remind myself of her and instantly I feel safe, loved, happy...
I love you, Ally.
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Comments
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I I applaud. Gooshawn is right!And Zach does have mad skills.*bows*
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omfg zach!
did u show ally this?
its so sweet! it's deep and powerful and full with love.
i was iffy about u 2 getting back together, but i can c ur sincere.
but if you ever hurt her i swear, that darkness will come back cause me and nicky'll knock you unconcious.
hahaha, yes, it is a threat.
keep writting, you've got mad skills dog.
xoxo,
--gooshawn<3
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*tear* That was moveing.For the love of God go work for hallmark already! lol.But it was touching and I'm sure Ally will like it.
On a serious ntoee how do you suddenly write these peoms and have them turn out good?
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