I'm letting it all go
Letting it out of my hands
Tonight
I relieve myself of crimson tears
Bleeding from the veins of my heart
Letting go
Of all your little lies
Never to look back again
And never to regret
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sometimes the hardest thing and the right thing are the same.
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So much strength it takes, but it's sometimes worth it... it depdns who you are, with me it is...
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Indeed.
Never to look back.
Thanks for entering.
You did the prompt justice.
When it is time to let go, it's time to let go...
without looking back..difficult but not impossible.
...Simply Me♥ -
I like the way you use the element of blood in your work. This is a great big helping of release. I really like this poem.
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Man the times I have been in this position in my life.
I can relate in a big big way
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I like your wording.
(line 4...word should be "relieve")
Good depth in this.
best wishes in your contest.
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I am guessing the title was the prompt since it doesn't say anything in the AN?
A fantastic write hun, strong and gripping.
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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