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Hatred

My innocence, soul
and image of being complete.
Hatred Consumes.

A contest entry

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 25, 2008
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    Hmmm, very powerful.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    this is an amazing and dark take on the pr0ompt but i really love how the words join together its awsome and short


  • SuicidalLover
    April 24, 2008

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    Nice

    Truly a dark write in my opinion. Love how words are coming together to mean something huge! Good luck to you!


  • Mistress Masquerade
    April 24, 2008

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    i love short writes. this one contains a lot of emotion, a very pleasant (and powerful) read. kudos to you, best of luck.


  • cherry-x-blossom
    April 24, 2008
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    thats a cool short write. nice work

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