Dull beauty
of a single dove
sitting upon
the garden fence
scrawny twig
hanging from
her silent beak
which she brings
back -
to construct
piece - by - piece
her home
Author notes
I wrote this in school the other day. I didn't think it was good enough to post, but I guess it's alright =D
Photo courtasy of Sandman:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/dotdoubledot/476141845/
A contest entry
- ~ pre-writes ~ by LadyUnique.
300 points, ended May 8, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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beautiful
Lovely poem this is -
very nicely done, i love doves, and the images are simple and pure. the picture is really lovely as well.
-cassidy
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i like this. it's stark and it works. i feel tedium and the feeling of doing what needs to be done
thanks for entering and good luck
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a little bit difficult to read the font is too light
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really goes with the image..
best of luck for the contest.
lekha
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Wonderful
Terrific poem for the image. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I LOVE THIS!!! I am such a bird watcher! This is just a wonderful write...glad you decided to share it!
Az
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I'm glad you had a change of heart... It's very lovely and touching... Nice job...
Ken
PS You might consider adding more contrast to the font/background so old guys like me can read it easier
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