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Cherished Mother

Cherished
Honoring and embracing
I am your forever devoted Daughter.
Like a flower picked from your bouquet of life
You are the Rose and I am the Stem
extending your loving
Care.

Mother
Protecting and keeping me from harm
forever embracing our love as Mother and Daughter.
You are the delicate Rosebud which gave to me life
and guided me through  the years of strife
with your loving
Touch.

 

 

 

Cherished Mother

Author notes

Hello sweety thank you for thinking about me, I decided to write a poem for you that you could use to give to anyone of ur wonderful moms here


Author notes
Mystical Creation
Free write Forms
form Created by Susan D. Bush

There is no begining title for these poems.
Must be between 55-75 words for each poem.
Your first two words from each stanza become your end title.

If you like this form and want to give it a try here
is a link that splains it, also if you do please send me a link so I can read it!
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4125727



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  • Nighttime angel
    May 10, 2008

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    this is absolutely beautiful my shinning star.. I love it, it speaks right from your heart. and it speaks in volumes. excellent job

    kat


  • libithina
    May 10, 2008

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    A loving tribute for all caring Mums s for you and s Lib x x


  • Arizona Sunset
    May 9, 2008

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    I love this beautiful background, and what a lovely form of poetry...I may take a chance and give this a whirl if I get a chance today...always up for a new challlange thank you for sharing this beauty...best to you in the contest~ Blessings always~ Trisha

  • Sunshine Princess
    May 5, 2008

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    I like your poem thank you very much for writing it for my contest I hope that you ahve a very nice day today


  • Tarja
    April 26, 2008

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    Gah! Seriously one of my favorite things about coming to your pieces is not just the stunning poetry itself but also those adorable, mystical and breathtaking backgrounds you always manage to create/find. This was a wonderful piece darlin... I wish my relationship with my mother could be like this Meh well. Thank you for the read. Good luck in the contest.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    April 25, 2008

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    Very beautifully written. Any mother would be gratefully to receive this poem Thanks for sharing your heart! Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 25, 2008

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    A Beautiful Tribute for Mother's Day!!
    well done & Good luck in the contest!!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 24, 2008
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    periful

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