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i cant explain these feelings i have for you

we lie in the meadow holding hands wishing this moment would never end while
watching the sun set for the day, and the clouds roll away,while the grass grows
taller,and the sky goes dark,i stare at you while the moon light glows upon your
skin memorizing your every move,as i feel my eyes full of tears,i blush as you wipe
them away and ask why it is i cry, my mind goes blank as i look into your eyes,
all i can say is i love you.

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  • evelynxxoo
    April 25, 2008

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    a lovely poem of love a love that is yours no one else so your stealing a moment to be with the one you love we cry sometimes because we want this happiness to last forever we feel complete love conquers all


  • Abner
    April 24, 2008
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    hey thanks for sharing..
    but nice material but the layout is not very proper.
    but thanks.