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Crooked Branches

Wilting buds upon drooping branches

slowly swaying in the afternoon wind..


Petals torn from their buds...

slowly falling to the ground

so below my palms


Coating the vivid grass

with a blanket

not unlike that of

a light winter dusting

Author notes

Prompt:
Trees

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  • carole21
    April 25, 2008
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    very nice descriptive write for the prompt . . nice photo also . . thanks for the contest entry . .