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- - - You're My Drug - - -

You’re there
Always fully stocked
Ready to give me anything and everything
I have to take you in small doses
For if I don’t I’ll be hooked
On your kisses
On your hugs
On your gentle words
You pull me in deeper and deeper
You bring me into your home
And don’t let me go
Your like the devil
Bringing me to my death
If I don’t let you go
I’ll be stuck with you forever
I can’t live without you
You’ve got me
And you won’t let me go
I’m being pulled into you
Into your loving embrace
Words of wisdom ring in my head
Telling me what I’m doing is wrong
But I shut them out
I don’t dare to let anyone make me doubt you
I am sure you’re my drug
You are the thing that keeps me going
I’m addicted
And Ill be sticking to you for a while

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  • GLiTTER LiPS
    May 15, 2008
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    hey gio i love once again..lol...plus i made my own account lol


  • Breathless Ballons
    May 12, 2008
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    i feel lyke im gona cry my eyes out!! its so deep!!-Dianna


  • xXemo-teddybearXx
    May 3, 2008
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    wow that wuz good
    but 12 and n luv trust me u feel these feelingz now but wutever u do dont give ur self to ur luv cuz they r going to break u..............if ur really lucky it wont happen now but eventually it will
    me 2 yrz passed then it happend but anyway it wuz a good poem


  • paperbackwriter
    April 30, 2008
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    cool i like this one the most soo far keep up the great work


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    April 27, 2008
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    Gio.....i love this poem....its sooo good..reminds me of addicted when reading..jeje

  • Northern Downpour
    April 26, 2008

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    I'll have to start with the fact that I don't really go for romantic poems, makes me gag a bit, but I actually liked this one. "I have to take you in small doses For if I don’t I’ll be hooked" Those were my two favorite lines because in a way it's so true. This poem could really go apply to anything. Great job :) ~Northern*Downpour~


    • Breathless Ballons
      April 26, 2008
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      .. lol. I am glad you enjoyed it and it didnt make you gag.. I'll be sure to read your poems!!!

      Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it! ♥

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