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Jagged-Strand Demon

Strand-jagged brown
falling in the way
flip and return
like the emo in denial

walk by quickly
avoiding, so easy
when you're covered
so easy to blame
wind for my face

its not that i
don't like you
its not that i
hate all you stand for

my hair just falls
in the way, accident
purely, accidental
as i rush to the next thought

elastic trial offer
but i wouldn't settle
thick and soft
i let it slip, back to the same

same same, the same
old thing
tired of resistance
and letting the monster
devour my face.

think what you like.
i'm done with caring.
peer from behind
and laugh at the nasty wig
we share.

Author notes

Hair is a pain. That's all I can say.

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  • iamlost gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    This is great, I love the tone in this, how hair is seen as important but it really is such a pain. I love lines
    "same same, the same
    old thing
    tired of resistance
    and letting the monster
    devour my face."
    Thank you for this wonderful entry!


  • cherry-x-blossom
    April 24, 2008
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    this is different but i like it