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Courtney (cool l, cool court)

ok. so the kids are stupid.
they make you cry.
you want to go back to where you belong.
but theres one thing for me.
your going to leave me to put up with all the kids.
i cant to anything with out you.
you know ill miss you.
its going to be hard.
i know its up to you but please stay.
please stay.

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hey c. this is for you. it may not be much but please stay.

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  • kel dog
    September 12, 2008
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    yeah i changed the poem. i had to get ride of it cause well thats private. well hope you like it.

  • cdudecosner
    April 25, 2008

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    Interesting take! I suppose that one is always a little hard to figure out. I mean, sure, they're your friend and all; but what happens when they don't care for you the way you care for them? Beautifully worded.


  • cherry-x-blossom
    April 24, 2008

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    thats a strong question there. ive asked a few ppl that in my life. i like how u worded this nice 1