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Blue Eyes Arent All Thats Blue

Your momma called me up last night
Yeah, I told her every thing's alright
I look at your picture in that heart-shaped frame
But its just not the same

I hate realizing your gone
I don't know how to carry on
I miss you calling me Angel Eyes
We didn't even get to say our good-bye's

Chorus:
My blue eyes aren't all that's blue
I can't seem to move on without you
I can't take the pain of a broken heart
We promised we'd never be apart

Years have now passed me by
And here I still sit lookin at the sky
Letting memories run through my mind
Just rockin' in my chair waiting for my time

Chorus:
My blue eyes aren't all that's blue
I can't seem to move on without you
I can't take the pain of a broken heart
We promised we'd never be apart

Now I lay in bed, old and grey
Today was my 88th birthday
I hold the locket you gave me tight
I close my eyes, I know this is my night

I feel you take my hand as we float into the skies
And you whispered, "I missed you my Angel Eyes"
Hearing that made a smile long overdo
Now my eyes are all that's blue

I'm no longer blue
Now that I have you

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  • Owl33
    April 25, 2008

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    Your words are as always excellent! I can imagine how beautiful they would be with music attached! Powerful ending in that death can be so ironic. We long to keep the people we love on earth and yet the dying long to get out to return to whom they loved! This is an excellent poem!!


  • Desire gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Wow~~

    Oh My now this is a Beauty of a song You have created
    Love the Lyrics and the words swell the eyes~

    Chorus:
    My blue eyes aren't all that's blue
    I can't seem to move on without you
    I can't take the pain of a broken heart
    We promised we'd never be apart
    These lines grab~~

    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • shadowlyn infinitas
    April 24, 2008

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    sweetly written with rhyme that suprisingly doesn't seem forced like most rhyme. good work here, you made me smile. applause for love and for your poem. best wishes
    shadowlyn