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I Blushed...

I blushed on are wedding day,
I blushed when you put that sliver band on my finger.
I blushed on the wedding night,
I blushed at the site of your body,
I blushed when you kissed me,
I blushed in your arms,
I blushed all night long.
I'm a blushing Bride and you are my blushing Groom.

Author notes

MY name is C,J
the poem came to mind for my dear friend Heather and on May 12 2008 she will be saying I DO.. and she will be that blushing Bride

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    thank you very much for this poem entry into the contest for jonny and april. i wish you the best of luck in the judging. viyanna rosemarie


  • N e a r
    May 1, 2008

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    I like your idea for the poem.. the option asked for "Blushing rose" as the title, not "I Blushed". Still, it was a neat and unexpected response. Thanks for your entry.