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Have to make up silly lies
to cover up scars i can not hide
have to make up silly jokes
to distract them from what they already now

The Brucies on my arms
and the cuts on my wrist
are some of the problems that esxit

does he really undertstand
what he does to me
or does he think that it is ok
to lay his hands on me

Is he that angry
that he can't control the will to hurt
or is it something that i said
that causes him to busrt

all  i know
is that he can't control his rage

cause i'm lying on the floor
bleeding from the ribs
just cause i asked him
a simple
can you do this?

i try reaching for the phone
to dial 9-1-1
but he kicks it away
and pulls out a gun

he puts it to my head
and get ready to shoot
and then he quitely whispers
he won't need that anymore

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  • SuiCiDaLKiSs
    May 29, 2008
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    such emotion

    i can feel the abuse..good luck in my contest


  • penman gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Sad, but so well expressed. Life does have it dark moments. None of us like them.


  • Breathless Ballons
    April 30, 2008

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    OMG, that is soo sad. It sucks taht people all over the world have to go through this. I hope this didn't happen to you...

    Really great poem, and you really portrayed some great emotions.

    Absolutely, one of the best poems i have ever read on AP!


    • paperbackwriter
      April 30, 2008
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      thxs soo much don't worry this never really happend to me just a random thought in my head you now you are really talented to


  • babypunk13
    April 24, 2008
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    awww thats like abuse that would suke if i were in that position its like i would get up and run and i would rather die trying then die not tryin

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