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How It Goes

Truth leaves no room to scrutinize,
Hidden lies that mortify,
My brain accepts, my heart denies,
He sees the fake beneath my eyes,
He's not the one I realize.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 21, 2008

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    wowe...

    this is simply mindblowing! your rhyme, your words, the flow the emotionsa, the imagery, everything fell into place so perfectly! this is one amazing write! how.do.you.do.it! lol! keep penning!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Brilliant

    this was a magnificent piece. you choice of words was peerfect. i really like the third line "My brain accepts, my heart denies,"