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Impact

His nurturing manner,
Caressed the jagged edges of her heart,
Smoothened out the buildup of coldness,
And toned the good natured human in her,
He always saw.

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    you've penned such great images for the reader to conjure up in their minds. well penned. this was a good piece.