When my life is over
there will be not a tear
To my family and friends
I was not even here
The weeks turned to months
months grew into years
Not a shoulder to lean on
to comfort my fears
Pretty flowers you bring
to lay on the ground
When I needed you most
you were not to be found
Today you're all here
so cry if you must
Alive you gave nothing
over me now you fuss
A contest entry
- Give me your best! by BabyBun.
450 points, ended May 8, 2008, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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450 points, ended July 11, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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congrats on your silver trophy xx
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thanks for your entry, i was touched by this great write xx
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A sad reminder about how we many times take our loved ones for granted. We need to treasure them while alive. This is a wonderful write. Congrats on the bronze. Well deserved! Blessings, Patty
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This really touched me. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Very sad.
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