Quickly taken over
swept up my this strange sensation
so softly between the moments
you feel the rising tension
the addiction is overwhelming
you feel it growing ever more
you've looked into her darkened eyes
its to late to regain control
Nothing works
though you've tried them all
she has you where she wants you
and she'll never allow you to stray to far
Addicted he is
to her beauty
like a sailor to a siren
he will never escape her seductive furry
Author notes
hahaha I can't believe I just wrote this! And I tried rhyming, what do u think? Did I do a fair job?? Because u that know me know I SUCK at rhyming stuff. ^_^
04/24/2008
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
Comments
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suck ?? are you kiddin? i think you rock !!
you did a great job with this poem in rhyming and flow and saying exactly what needed to be said! yay! addictions are hard to break especially when its a person that youre addicted to!
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Thank You!!
And no, I think u rock!!!!!!!!!!!
^_^
~Lorissa~
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