it doesn’t matter who is right and who is wrong
it cannot change the heartfelt goodbye
I feel weak without you.
I’m so far away from you.
I am a coward
I ran
I ran from you
from the love
you gave
gave freely
freely to me
I’m at fault for the shell of a person
that person that sits day in and day out
alone
withered
withered like the roses long since sent
right or wrong I left
left you
left us
alone
to part
but now I hope
I hope tomorrow ends
ends with a whisper in the wind
whisper to you
how much I love
love you
right or wrong I am fault
for how far we came
no, how short we came
to loving each other truly
because in the end
I am wrong and at fault
Author notes
title: right or wrong
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understanding what it right and waht is wrong can become a personal battle for many of us. Loved this part:
whisper to you
how much I love
love you
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this is so perfect for a contest that i just posted today. i was almost in tears as i finished reading this from you. my boyfriend and i just broke up because of gossip and my heart is breaking. thank you for sharing something so beautiful with me. viyanna rosemarie
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