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My Mistake

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I've been living my life
Like a dress-rehearsal
As though everything is staged,
But you only get one shot at it
To get on the front page.
It's time to face the music,
My face a painted mask,
It's the close of the final act
And I have lost my cast.
I've wasted all these costumes
Choosing who I want to play,
I find myself alone again
Grieving another wasted day.

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  • hmmmmmmm
    April 26, 2008
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    Like it!!

    Short but sweet! The last two lines are a perfect ending! Good luck and I'll keep you posted!


  • Amazon Huntress
    April 24, 2008
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    sorry for edit, ironically I found a spelling mistake! *blushes*
    ~ poet