I ran from you on that day
the rain was falling down in black sheets
as the bus pulled up to the curb
I looked back hoping to see you running up
and screaming "DON"T GO!"
I ran from you on that day
the sun was hidden from view
the bus was hear and I stepped on.
As the doors closed i sat down in my seat and pulled
window shade down, the sounds of screaming was
heard on the bus as the gun went off.
Author notes
my name is C.J
Ap name is Sundesigner / the poem
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Comments
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o wow. what an explosive ending! left me wanting more! thanks for the entry
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