The nights I spend
Thinking about you
And trying not to cry
Are uncountable
The days I spend
Locked inside my house
Like a prisoner
Are far too many to remember
The weekends I spend
By the beach
Trying to remember you
Are always haunting me
You are always haunting me
I feel as if you are watching me
Every move I make
Every step I take
You are there
And it pains me to know
I have broken your heart
Because mine is slowly breaking too
Author notes
I know how bad it feels to be hurt. How it overtakes your life and all you want to do is hideaway. As the days go by, you eventually get better.
Great contest, and I hope you get plenty of emotional entries.
A contest entry
- Do you still forget the breeze? by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended May 17, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hmm?
Comments
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I especially liked the last two lines.
Sometimes breaking someone else's heart breaks your own too, I guess.
Thank you for entering and your authors notes are so true.
Sophie.
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love ur poem...u express soo much emotion
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