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Calling On A Friend



Are you down,
If so, come on around.
And if your too full of glee to see,
That maybe its not all you but really me,
That needs some of that soulless joy,
To not feel like a tattered toy,
Please open up your door,
And save me from this war,
Between maturity and the child within,
Come please invite me in.

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I ws writing a something for a friend just for fun and she told me to post it

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  • kiwi bird
    July 8, 2008
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    you are not suppose to.
    it is merely about someone who would like some cheering up


  • mzmikki
    July 8, 2008
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    Didn't see anything about death here...


  • grapefruite
    April 24, 2008
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    Very nice!!! This is one of my favorites!!! Love the "tattered toy" and "between maturity and the child within" Simply wonderful with great insight. And (even though you might have written this about me , I'M ALWAYS HERE FOR YOU. JUST TELL ME TO SHUT UP!!! (in those words)


  • Master-G
    April 24, 2008

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    liked this poem alot! friends are very important in life! what would you do without friends? you can choose your friends but not your family! good saying lol. Really liked this poem great read thanks