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I Will

When those painful tears
Begin to fall
I will catch them all

When those heart wrenching cries
Release from your lips
I shall chase them all away

I will always love you
In the good times as well as the bad times
Through sadness and joy

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  • Mrs.Chips
    April 26, 2008
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    This poem shows such devotion! It's lovely and I really enjoyed it.


  • penman gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    So very well done. So full of love. Best of luck in the contest.


  • MelodiousDreaming
    April 25, 2008

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    Quite nice indeed, though I must admit it was a bit hard to read with the background and such. But lovely job nonetheless.


  • going nowhere
    April 24, 2008
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    very sweet...
    do you mean love for you?