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Apricot

 

An Apricot upon that spot
streched out towards the sky,
I watched from cot in garden grot
its spring sprigs spring so high.

As babe begot its shoots I'd spot,
and ever wonder why
from sweet seed pot to sunny spot
transplanted was nearby.

As tiny tot I soon could trot,
and try to knot my tie.
and tie a knot – for this could not
my searching spirit try.

Then up I shot a dread despot,
though not yet four foot high;
and the upshot ? the tree had got
taller by far than eye.

I ne’er forgot when it was hot
to rinse its roots so dry,
its crop I’d pot as cooked compot,
each quintal quantify.

I dream a lot on Apricot
as dread Death’s dot draws nigh:
ere Charon’s cot to Hades hot
Acheron’s swamps sweeps by.

For ‘tis Man’s lot with boring bot
in septic slumber lie;
fated to frot with worm, maggot,
to rot where false friends lie.

Forget me not, please pitch my plot, -
this last wish gratify -
let Apricot my last cold cot
and headstone signify....

 

Spring

 

 

 

 

http://www.flickr.com/photos/joka2000/2228694634/

 

Summer

 

 

 

 

http://www.flickr.com/photos/55884791@N00/2408745044/

Autumn

 

 

http://www.flickr.com/photos/petitechose/167630046/

Winter

 

 

http://www.flickr.com/photos/ln_artography/2426053874/



Author notes

picture
http://www.flickr.com/photos/blondepowers/2432232912/

Background

http://www.flickr.com/photos/matthijs/541420352/sizes/l/


grot - grotto
quintal - unit of weight equal to 100 kilograms
Charon - Hell's ferryman
cot - boat, coracle
Acheron - River Styx, Lethe
bot - botfly larva

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  • Rowan Oak
    September 24

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    Beautiful life you've breathed into this apricot poem! Congratulations on the gold trophy; it was well earned for such s thoughtful write!

  • unavailable
    September 16

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    For ‘tis Man’s lot with boring bot
    in septic slumber lie;
    fated to frot with worm, maggot,
    to rot where false friends lie.

    Forget me not, please pitch my plot, -
    this last wish gratify -
    let Apricot my last cold cot
    and headstone signify....


    Why do I love these most?

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  • WinnerGenius
    July 25

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    Yummilicious!!

    Deep, profound, witty. A happy poem which pinches in the end, and the heart goes 'Ouch!!!', that's what this poem does. Which is good. An analogy of life written in a comic, mocking sorta way, but it just shows how serious you are around the last lines.I want to cry!!! What a noble way to end a poem. And you also tease with these fruits all over the page. Great poem, God bless you. Congrats for the Gold trophy, very well deserved

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  • Night Hope gold member
    April 26

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    "Forget me not, please pitch my plot, -
    this last wish gratify -
    let Apricot my last cold cot
    and headstone signify...."

    Beautiful, deep, significant & pure, dear Scribe. N'er fear, my Friend...you could never be forgot. As long as any Poet breathes, you shall remain...& ever beyond these mortal frames of Man. Wonderful penning, Sweetie. Great pictures & background, too. They make me long for the taste of my mother's apricot jam... Wanda

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  • Wow, this was such a great poem to be reading

    The flow so smooth, great rhythm form the tight work on the wording and rhyming.

    Loved the theme of the apricot, they way the poem moved through so well from start to finish, feeling like it had a beginning and an ending etc

    What a great background, so fitting of course lol, but aso enticing, I wanna eat some apricots

    Well done and wish you luck in the contest you have it in



    Cindy

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  • I thought the rhyimg was excellent and very well written. The imagery fit perfectly as well as your pictures. the story telling was remarkable. great job!
  • the rhyme in this almost had me tongue twisted. you did such a wonderful job on this and i wish you the very best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie

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