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Double Dare (with Jeff Sir)

I sit and send an SMS to jem
Get in the loo with nothing on at all
Vibrator in your pussy to the stem
But do not come until you hear My call

with panties moist the time has come to find
the bathroom where i will of course obey
i strip, the vibe in deep i hope He’s kind
my body aches, His word controls the play

Five minutes action then you come on cue
You must be home by ten to six today
The are some tasks that I have set for you
Before I get to use you for My play

in front of You i kneel, i am so late
i feel my shame, i know You feel it too.
my Master, eyes to floor i know my fate.
i hear Your sigh, i know that i’ve failed You.

Ten minutes late so slap yourself ten times
Then pull the plug that's settled in your bum
After punishment for all your crimes
It's time your Master chose His place to come

first with my teeth i unzip what i need,
so sweet the pain that has set free my fire,
my licks beneath the shaft i long to feed
i spread in cat-like stance for Your desire.


I chose the spot and enter you with ease

        my wish Your pleasure Sir, my whispered pleas

 

Author notes

Cowritten by cricketjeff and DLC-Jem as a double dare challenge.

 

Artwork Luis Royo

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  • BearWoman gold member
    July 15

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    This was a fun read and make me chuckle and laugh several times. I enjoyed the back-and-forth banter of the collab.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    April 25, 2008
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    Wonderfully HOT HOT write you both have here. Well done to the two of you.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Tattboyspet
    April 25, 2008
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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
    You GO MISTRESS Jem!!!!!!
    I thought you did a pretty good job here considering as it's not your norm
    as for Jeff ... come on Mister - USE HER!!!!
    to both of you!!!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    Well done...a great collab between you both and sonnets as well!!!!

    All the best..Sue


  • tanzanite
    April 24, 2008

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    This is hot hot hot. You both did a fantastic job. Well done on a piece that is so complimentary and that shows such balance. Jem I did not know you had it in you to switch like this and Jeff, wow, well quite the Dom you are.

    • Corvus Corone
      April 25, 2008
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      Thank you Gaia, I just knew Jeff would be special to write with. I don't think I could or would switch to this extent in reality I like turning it mid scene too much...


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Multitudinous applauses for both of you! this is a very heating write. Vivid imagery and wonderful dialog between Dom and sub.


  • craftyangel43
    April 24, 2008
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    Jem Ma'am and Jeff...very well written. I liked it very much. *smiles*.
    crafty

    • Corvus Corone
      April 24, 2008
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      Thank you crafty, it was fun to write with my poetic mentor Jeff and as always I learned heaps just got to keep it in me head.

      xxx Jem


  • The Poetic Angel
    April 24, 2008

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    Oh Jems m'Lady You and Sir Jeff have done a brill job i must say You Both make a wonderful Couple this is a awsome write

    i love You Jems

    xxx Your angel xxx

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