Silent butterfly waits,
wishing to fly.
Always questioning...
{Am I beautiful?}
Answers elude her.
Confusing frustrations,
never reaching a...
...conclusion.
A contest entry
- I owe a quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended May 2, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your favorite picture inspired pt 2 by whispernthedark.
625 points, ended May 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very graceful. Too many girls feel this, you captured it wonderfully. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Oh. Wow. This is amazing.
It just... Is...
I really love your descriptions.... Your use of language is just awesome in this piece.
Great job
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Thank you my daughter is very special to me and I love her with all my heart.
This was a dedication for Charlotte, and as a thank you to Kat her mom...
Simon
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Well done indeed. A great take.
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Thank you for your comment. Alas your poem is beauty inspired. I wish you luck in this contest! * *
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Wow~~
Now this piece gives much to think about especially the last line~
Powerful words and images
Confusing frustrations,
never reaching a...
...conclusion.
These lines grab~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Aww that's lovely bro! I think we all have those insecurities... you captured something perfect for the pic
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Well done brother mine!! You did such a great job with this prompt, you really took us into the picture and made us(me at least) feel what she was,and think was she was thinking as well.. Great write.. Best of luck to you!!
Jetleena
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This style suites you bro. I like it surprising as I am the rhymer addict but slowly getting rid of that bad habbit....
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Hey dude, I didn't know you could write like this....just kidding. Fantastic as can be expected. Can I say I love you too. or only when we are alone...he he I am full of it. sorry...tired..
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lol...I LOVE YOU MY TWIN BROTHER...I love this sort of write, Steph taught me a while back, sometimes it works sometimes it doesn't. I quite like this though!
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I love this and I am sure that she will too my love.
the answer to the question is yes she is beautiful..
Love it. you did a great job on this
good luck
kat
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Hurry up dude
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