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Redeemer

There are horrors in the human race
Revealed in the shadows of a person's face
The corruption consuming there soul
A soul which becomes so very cold

But there are some few who are higher
The kindness in their souls is like fire
Maybe there exists a hope for humanity
And all is not lost to insanity

One day I will be like these few
A true self moving soul, like you
For now I wish to be lost in the arms of a dreamer
The shine in eyes and hear, my redeemer.

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    April 29, 2008
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    Very deep. Great job on the rhyming without it sounding forced. Good flow to it. Love it!