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Forever Falling

Not to long ago I had thought I was falling for you.
But some thing went wrong.
They said it was 'just' a crush, I laughed and said that was un-true.
Now I see I was naive,

If I had one wish, would I wish I'd never meet you?

As you hold her the way you held me, I'm forever falling into a deep abyss.

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Sorry it a little all over the place.

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  • live-laugh-love
    July 2, 2008
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    no it is verry well written i like it! ^_^
    and thats saying something!


  • esimbf
    April 26, 2008
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    Awwwwwwww, (hahaha i win) i loved it very good very good bravo


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 26, 2008

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    I quite like this and do not feel it is "over the place" I think you have expressed yourself well.
    Great write

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda