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Opposites

Hello!
Good-bye!

Sun
Moon

Me
You

Love
Hate

Fire
Water

Light
Dark

Opposites can be fun
Especially while basking in the sun
Let's have fun for everyone! 

Author notes

Ths is rlly bad!!! Srry!!!

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  • pancake
    May 5, 2008
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    Awww. thats actually really cute and different. im getting to love your work. i was reading this other one and the computer shut down. but it was the one about a teenager...LOVED IT. when i find it i'll leae a comment. but i loved this poem well done!


    • SmartBrick
      May 5, 2008
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      Oh my gosh! Thanks! U should know i did not right 2 of them though. My special friend wrote two of them.But i did write this one and the teenager one!(the and teenager smiles i think it is called...)
      Thank u so much!


  • jewlinz
    April 25, 2008
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    no I really like it. you shouldn't have that as author notes!


  • jewlinz
    April 25, 2008
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    he he this is cute nice work!


  • omg-its-sara
    April 24, 2008

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    HEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It made my LAUGH OUT LOUD on the part where you said-
    "Opposites can be fun
    Especially while basking in the sun"

    I LOVE THAT PART! THIS IS THE MOST BRILLIANT POEM I HAVE EVER READ!


  • Miss Chievous
    April 24, 2008
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    nooooo this is COOLIO I it!

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