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At times your chapped words ring stiff breaking ribs with every sentence.

You spill out films of misery from every crevice of your tongue.

I keep coming back as the stain of those phrases are washed  off my hands.

That’s what insanity does it mettles with perception.

At times you hold me like a trinket on your wrist.

And when you swear you never knew me you glance at me.

I know the truth for the screen in your eyes has never uttered fallacy.

You were my pigeon, I your stoop but we both flew too soon.

We were the thrust of cold winter wind.


We were the stories never lanced to memories.

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  • Gypsie Ink
    April 28, 2008

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    Interesting

    I really like "You were my pigeon, I your stoop but we both flew too soon." Nice write.

    Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest.


  • Sanguinarius
    April 24, 2008
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    A very enjoyable piece, Best of luck to you ~Bret~