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Soap and Sour Grapes

Gnarly chap in knickers,
selling trinkets on the corner
counting his money with abacus on his lap.

Fur clad star of screen,
stopping just to mettle
buying a pennant announcing her next film.


Rich lass and pauper,
meeting by happenstance
thrust together by lance of fate
never to meet again.




Author notes

Word bank: Title: Soap, grape(s).
Poem: Gnarly chap Knickers Trinket fur screen knickers
pennant film abacus lass lance thrust mettle

I hope more than 10 is okay! Thanks...super word bank!

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  • Gypsie Ink
    April 28, 2008

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    Very Nice

    and that's a super poem. Nice job on the words and how you brought them all into a nice little story.

    Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest.


  • crazymomma
    April 27, 2008
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    Wow, this is cool the way you incorporated the words and it didn't seem forced at all


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 24, 2008

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    • islekine gold member
      April 26, 2008
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      Thanks Amy!

      I apprecitate the comments...this was a fun word bank...
      Write on!
      *PEACE*


    • islekine gold member
      April 26, 2008
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      Mahalo!


      Write on!
      *PEACE*


  • peridotPixi
    April 24, 2008

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    This is a good poem, you have put the words together nicely and they flow great, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy

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