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The Biggest Mistake Of My Life

Me and my mom one day had a fight.
Her money out of her purse was missing.
So she started accusing me of stealing her money.
I was so furios that my own mother would blame me for something I didn't do.
So this was the biggest mistake of my life
Telling my mom that I hated her.
So I calmed down and watched some televsion.
As I was watching it I remembered what I said to my mom.
I said I hated her just because she accused me of stealing her money.
So when I got back to focusing on the movie.
This little boy had a fight with his dad and the dad accused him of messing up the house. It was very dirty. And the first thing the the little boy said "I HATE YOU" daddy you are always accusing me of things and you know what his dad died in his sleep. The little boy never got a chance to say goodbye.The last thing he said was "I HATE YOU"daddy.

When I saw that on television I regreted saying to my mom I hate you. So I apologized.And then we hugged each other. So I decided to help my mom look for her money. I took my mom's purse and looked inside. I saw the money in a very small spot in her purse. So my mom apologized and we made made dinner together.

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  • hmmmmmmm
    April 26, 2008

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    I like it!!

    Love the story it tells and this is def a situation that a lot of us have been in. Thanks for not entering a prewrite, I really appreciate that! Finalist!