Creativity
Good and bad
Black and white
Yin and Yang
The quill prints
my every thought
dreams come to life
As the poet creates
his grammatical visions
and illusions with words
Author notes
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Artist as seen from Photobucket: A_Series_of_Meditation_ 4_ by_ Otiose
In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Meditation and Momentum *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 1, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Balance and Imagination
This piece tugged at Spirit and when I was reading...
felt this presence...just over my shoulder
Now I am seeing what appears to be like frustration...
It feels like...when You were writing this...
I'm seeing like an example: paper balled up and tossed...
like thoughts written-typed...then erased...deleted
start over again...and hearing sighs...
For some reason...hearing the word: Bath...
like someone needing to take a bath...and had to stop
what You were doing...that is what I am being shown...
Interruption of process~~and hearing: Oh Well...
and feeling of wanting to cry
I'm nudged to mention word: Beautiful
Very Interesting images indeed...
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Black and white
Yin and Yang
The quill prints
my every thought.
Excellent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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As a poet you paint in words leaving illusion and images behind for the reader to ponder or linger within a thought or idea...to raise questions. A great take on the prompt...to see beyond the vision searchin and seeking. Nicely penned... good luck in this contest.
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I like how you can actually understand the meaning. It is very well written.
Best of Luck,
Silenced One -
Grammatical visions - I love it!
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Nice I like the flow, and the picture fits so nicely with it... good job!
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