Do lee on see do lee on see
do lee on see for me do lee on see for me
to leo th ecat to leo the lion to leo the thayin i ain' the way of sayin to lie is to lee to lie is to say to lie is to be an d i dont have a tree
I n the end there was a song and in the end there was a see but i dont know no body in the eye that i wanted to see to lee tolate to lee to lee i ain't no body and thats the end of the see
To lie is to see to lie is to lay
to lie is to tile to lie is today
To lines in the fountian to lines in the see
to lines in the oat in
to lines in the see
to late is the oat in
to late is the see
to lines in the fountian
to lines in the see
to lands in the sea. Do Do
Author notes
To lands in the sea.
Comments
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With three days left for entries, and considering that this work made no effort at all to conform to the conditions of the contest, I'm forced to remove it in order to vacate space for serious entries. Sorry.
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Given that many "first day" poems often suffer some revision before final judging (which will take place during the final three days before close) I won't comment on this poetically yet. The contest ends May 8th...I'd like to see all editing done and your product "finished" by the fifth if possible, to aid me in judging in a timely manner.
Please return to the contest page for additional rules and conditions...
...and in this case, I should advise you that this verse is nothing even close to a villanelle. I suggest you look up the form and try again.
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