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Undressing You

Jane's infamous shirt comes first,
my fingers pull the fabric up and out
of your pants (where I would rather be)
and expose your chest to my hungry eyes.
    This is where I leave lingering kisses
    through the curling hairs across your frame
    and you tremble at my breath on your skin.

I move on to your belt,
pulling you closer with the loops and
sliding the leather (mmm..leather) out
and to the floor with a flick of my hand.
    Pause for effect as your breath quickens
    at the thought of my next step -
    I grin at your pleading eyes.

Finally I reach my main goal: (the pants),
procrastinating at the fly with teasing fingers
gently sliding the zipper down, down, down
and looking at you with a smile.
    Your eyes burn as my small hands slide to
    where they always longed to be, the only sound
    khakis crumbling to the floor.

            Happy birthday to me.

Author notes

Jane's shirt is a reference to a poem by Jane Kenyon.

"The Shirt"
The shirt touches his neck
and smooths over his back.
It slides down his sides.
It even goes down below his belt-
down into his pants.
Lucky shirt.

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