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Chee ter

Tell me the way to see is to me
two mines you said to see two
two mines you said to see are not mine to see so leo said to me i am the way to see and in the end he said to me what am i to who to he to lines in the fountian to lines in the city see i ain;t a loutian i ain't aloutian in the see two lines in the fountian to lines in the see to lines to you see you to lines that you ment to me.

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To lee i am

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  • hmmmmmmm
    April 24, 2008

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    Liking it!!

    This really is my type of poem, short to the point with great Rhythm. Finalist! Good luck- I'll keep you posted!