Smiles on your childrens faces, their laughter carried
On a gentle breeze, the scent of cherry blossom, the
Buzzing of the bee's
Rivers flowing gracefully into the oceans and the sea
I pray for God to carry you, in your times of need
Enfold you in his warm embrace, comfort and keep you strong
Take pleasure in all of these as you walk along; the road of sobriety
Your head held up high, with your children, friends and family, always by your side
I hope this gives you the strength to continue
on the journey you have just started.
Wishing you and yours the very best.
Love ~sugar~
A contest entry
- Recovering Alcoholics Need Poetry Too ... Support Needed by Asylaarix.
725 points, ended May 8, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sugar! This was amazingly stunning darling ... I am so appreciative of your poetry here ... it's beautiful ... breathtaking ... stunning ... supportive ... and just all and all gorgeous ... thank you for your kind words ... I am sure my sister will find great support and wisdom from this piece ... Thank you again and good luck to you in the contest ...
Much love and respect
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment - I'm speechless.
Love ~sugar~
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BREATH TAKING
Such beautiful and caring words of comfort...they lay softly on the heart and sooth the mind...I just know she will draw great comfort from them winner for sure 
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Encouraging
Very encouraging words here, sis. "Smiles on your children's faces, their laughter carried on a gentle breeze." Those are pretty words there. Great, sis.
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Thank you once again for your lovely comment, glad you enjoyed it.
Love your sis, ~sugar~
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A FINE PIECE, INDEED!
A compassionate and inspiring piece, Sugar. Concise, precise, and straight to the heart of the matter. The photograph is a beautiful one and suits the background and your soulful and heartfelt poem perfectly. Good Luck in this contest with this one - and I hope and pray that this will help many a recovering alcoholic fine his or her way!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Hi sweetie.
Thank you for your fab comment, a pleasure to read as always. Sometimes I think it's knowing that there are people out there that care that helps and can have an impact.
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Wonderful Sugar. This is very very beautiful. Wonderful words of beauty to give hope in deepest despair.
Love
Wayne Leon
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Thank you hon.
You're a gem...appreciate your comments always a pleasure.
Love ~sugar~xx
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Just the contest I need to enter
This is beautiful. Certainly, something that I need to see. 10 years sober has led me to just enjoying the moment and smelling the roses.
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And that my friend is something worth celebrating and be proud of.
Thank you for your lovely comment, always a pleasure to recieve and read.
Wishing you the very best always
Love ~sweetness~ x
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Awww
this is very warm and heart felt sis. Great imagery and peace flowed well in this piece. Good luck in the contest
I loved the love and support shown in this.
Ephiphany
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Thank you sis, just felt I had to write,
to let her know she is not on her own.
Thank you for your luck and lovely comment
always valued and appreciated.
where you hiding?
~sugarcookie~
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