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Sunshine

The sunshine of my life knows when im sad
She comforts me and makes me laugh
Without knowing it my troubles disappear
She tells me when i make her sad
but forgives me with a kiss
She loves me and is not afraid to show it
She loves to be with me and spends every moment in my arms
She knows im flawed but loves them
She knows i can't always be prince charming
She doesn't want that
She wants me to be myself
She supports my poetic soul
gives me reason to live
not afraid to take control
grab my hand and kiss me with burning passion
She tells me what she wants
and more importantly
Doesn't play with my heart
The sunshine of my life
Doesn't exist

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  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    wow this is awsome. i really like the last line i think it pulls the whole poem togther. im sure u will find ur sunshine. what u are asking for is not a hard thing to give. if she loves u it will all come naturaly. keep looking.


  • Popping Balloons
    April 24, 2008
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    awww this is really cute i go with once on this one there is someone out there for you deffinatly


  • oncebittentwiceshy
    April 24, 2008
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    aww this is sooooooo sweet!!! until the end... there is a sunshine out there for you