Gently drifts upon ocean breeze,
zephyr dance in thoughts to please.
Walk hand in hand mid summer daze,
beneath the sky of purple haze.
Warm lazy day as lovers stroll,
gaze eyes to eyes around atoll.
Red sun now setting hearts ablaze,
as horizon bows to parting rays.
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick-A-Letter by Kelli Marie.
1800 points, ended May 8, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully done and with a Z!
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Wow ~
You penned with the *Z*....whew!
Such a lovely write for such an uncommon letter to reside in your wisely chosen words....for each line to boot! ~
Lovely presentation as well and sure to grab Kelli's attention...
....good luck Sweety and God bless you and your talents,
Brother Bear ~
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VERY WELL! Z is a difficult letter, and you blew me away
Great Job and best of luck in the contest
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A beautiful picture to put with your soft words. It is a eonde rhow the chemestry of it all works. Then maybe it works for those in love or in hopes of finding love. There is something about a beautiful sunset to warm feelings. I hope ypu win big with this one. Papagallo
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great picture to go with your strolling words of love and the captivating nature of how chemistry works all on it's on.
hope you take home a trophy
Tammara
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Lovely Comment
Good morning and thank you Tamara. I appreciate you stopping by. You take care, Sandy
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A very beautiful write. Presentation compliments your lovely words. Very nice. Thank you for sharing.
Kelli -
So pink
so dreamy and so nice- red sun at night saliors delight
is what I heard...mac
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Good Morning Mac
I an glad you enjoyed my dream. Gee I have alot of them lately. Well I guess we are never to old to dream and they do come true sometimes. You have a wonderful day. Hugs and Smiles across the miles.
Bless you,
Sandy 
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hello my lovely auntie
I see a lovely romantic piece here. The background and the image and the whole thing fit together. A nice job.
Wish you the best luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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My Sweet Niece
Hello dear Shahrzad, Your comment brings a smile. I hope you are doing well asnd are smiling. You take care, Sandy
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The picture and poem work well together.The gente rhyme and flow move the reader through to ocean breeze to walk hand along water. A day to stroll with hearts blending into the horizon. A lovely read to wait on the setting sun in acceptance of soft sound carress the shore as the water laps and returns to the sea.
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Thank You My Friend
Ah, Another lovely comment. You are a wonderful friend and you are in my thoughts and prayers. Sending you some Big Yellow Sunshine.
Bless You,
Sandy
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