my eyes ~
they tell so much
all the pain
all the strife
every night kept away from you
mother, why did you leave me?
alone, cold, lost
without any hope
you never loved me
only pushed me away
like a rag doll
nothing more than
plastic
Author notes
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wonderful write, i liked it alot!
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Funny how I know how this feels....I don't like it one bit. Any way on to the poem... great emotion emits from it. Good luck to you!
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i like it it wasn't to long like some (Most of mine) and you got your point out.
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Well..this is indeed very serious piece. and your pain is very well noted. I do share the sentiments stated here. May be you are too young and can't imagine the compulsions of your mother. I just want as a human being to get released your pain ... just think that what is happening is not a delebrate attempt by someone.It is the nature which is responsible for designing the life of all of us. Nature may rectify every thing one day.Just pray for it..and Be happy securing your happiness in present and the future as awell..God bless..very senstive write is here....and thanks for commenting on my work...
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u r so sweet
my feelings kind of relate to this. not much tho. there was a point where she left me but she came back after a few years.... we r still trying to patch up
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Very nice piece .... short, and beautiful
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thank u
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