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  • jeffstofsky
    June 4, 2008
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    totally feel this. simple yet deep

  • ksenia juggalette
    May 18, 2008
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    wut happened 2 the poem?


  • alice-in-wonderland
    April 28, 2008
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    nice

    nice work. i like it. i was like that at one point in time in my life. keep up the writing.


  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    April 25, 2008
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    Pretty Good

    It's good. I feel like that a lot.


  • XNevermindX
    April 24, 2008

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    Whoa this is such a understandable and relatable poem. There is something in it that moves me but i cant place it..... Anyway brilliantly good poem.


  • lilmayra
    April 24, 2008

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    I totally understand how you feel. I have put a fake smile up for so long that I lost myself in the process. It's hard to have to deal with the pain but know that there are others who feel just the same.

  • hmmmmmmm
    April 24, 2008

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    wow

    This is a poem which I can really relate to! Is it a lyric? If not it'd make a great one! Thank you for entering. I'll keep you posted!
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