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Tulips

 

Tulips

By: Julia L. Clark

 

 

Today has poured down raining while,

Tuesday rise speaking

Thursday hello’s.

Umbrella sings taping water joy.

As myLove is in harmony with truth,

As I Impatiently wait for the

Pro patria of this season,

To center stage my growing love,

In a table top concert.

 

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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  • Kelli Marie
    April 25, 2008

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    This is a nice write, presented very well. One line, "Love is in harmony" has no T. You still have a bit of time left before judging. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Beautiful! ;)

    You are straight out amazing, and I enjoy your words and art work.
    Thanks for sharing here sweet queen.

    -Timothy aka Mushy King.


  • ennovy silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    You are amazing and this piece also shows you can work some wonders with very few words. I love flowers and this was awesome...novy


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      April 24, 2008
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      thanks for your support mrs e i am happy to entertain you in otherways i feel great thanks


  • kennethlaney
    April 24, 2008
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    Very nice

    IS THIS JULIA? You feeling O>K baby. LOL Love you sweety. "BOO"


  • Candy6
    April 24, 2008
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    lovely

    I live in Michigan we have the Tulips. Tulips are the beautiful flowers, too.


  • Ephiphany
    April 24, 2008

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    This is very refreshing

    and delicate as I listen to your voice speaks soft tones to these words. Well penned, and good luck in the contest.

    theLady

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      April 24, 2008
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      thank you baby luv u i am feeling rather refreshed so trying to write
      while i am in what i call this punk move thank

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